tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7447544468792389936.post2730457072729093214..comments2024-02-26T21:18:23.165-08:00Comments on CHIMERAS: Sunday Snippet: MOSAICSAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09922888671399516573noreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7447544468792389936.post-16058750741302824872014-08-26T08:36:59.115-07:002014-08-26T08:36:59.115-07:00thank you Odins, Heather and Jeff!
Botanist: sorr...thank you Odins, Heather and Jeff!<br /><br />Botanist: sorry about the inconvenience, I should have my name in the blog title, that would make it easier. All my links are in the G+ about page, but not every user puts them there... thanks for your comment!EEGiorgihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11477791781485536775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7447544468792389936.post-4974043845062176882014-08-25T20:08:34.972-07:002014-08-25T20:08:34.972-07:00Very compelling snippet. I'm intrigued that th...Very compelling snippet. I'm intrigued that this is the <i>end</i> of chapter 1. It sounds like the perfect hook to begin a story with.<br /><br />BTW - thanks for visiting my blog. I tracked you down by accident from Goodreads. I hate, loathe, despise Google+ with a passion because it makes it so darned difficult to find a person's blog when they leave a comment. Grrrr... *phew* Rant over :)Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7447544468792389936.post-69787286513189236592014-08-25T15:27:49.823-07:002014-08-25T15:27:49.823-07:00Great piece for an opening chapter. Very intriguin...Great piece for an opening chapter. Very intriguing.JTsuruokahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05173187123835069767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7447544468792389936.post-16477374407260806482014-08-25T04:14:19.591-07:002014-08-25T04:14:19.591-07:00Fantastic snippet! Can't wait to finally read ...Fantastic snippet! Can't wait to finally read my copy of this book... :)Heather R. Holdenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04309060285955963459noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7447544468792389936.post-77737478481274962382014-08-25T03:52:22.220-07:002014-08-25T03:52:22.220-07:00Interesting snippet, leaves my head running throug...Interesting snippet, leaves my head running through a bunch of different possibilities.Odinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08406448127317910741noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7447544468792389936.post-5198941218523765782014-08-24T22:39:36.964-07:002014-08-24T22:39:36.964-07:00This snippet gave me an honest-to-god shiver down ...This snippet gave me an honest-to-god shiver down my spine. So few words, and yet I got a very strong sense of early-summer LA.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7447544468792389936.post-92002672973067993732014-08-24T21:34:44.766-07:002014-08-24T21:34:44.766-07:00thanks Geoff!! :-)thanks Geoff!! :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09922888671399516573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7447544468792389936.post-5915766246922504952014-08-24T21:34:30.395-07:002014-08-24T21:34:30.395-07:00and I love you Teresa!! :-)and I love you Teresa!! :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09922888671399516573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7447544468792389936.post-90960229059861121942014-08-24T21:00:11.545-07:002014-08-24T21:00:11.545-07:00Cool. I'm looking forward to hooking up with T...Cool. I'm looking forward to hooking up with Track again :-)Geoffreyhttp://geoffreydunn.com.au/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7447544468792389936.post-33388995519557132712014-08-24T18:46:14.874-07:002014-08-24T18:46:14.874-07:00What can I say? This snippet is atmospheric! It...What can I say? This snippet is atmospheric! It's working to set the tone. :-) I loved the book!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7447544468792389936.post-8347644546355576932014-08-24T16:57:12.397-07:002014-08-24T16:57:12.397-07:00thanks so much for stopping by PT, Veronica, Sue A...thanks so much for stopping by PT, Veronica, Sue Ann, Elaine and Carol!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09922888671399516573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7447544468792389936.post-18527884359774806392014-08-24T15:52:03.082-07:002014-08-24T15:52:03.082-07:00Great beginning hook. Six lines of rapid fire, the...Great beginning hook. Six lines of rapid fire, then boom!Carol Burnside aka Annie Rayburnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12293010041077113759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7447544468792389936.post-2940822478246183002014-08-24T13:52:26.420-07:002014-08-24T13:52:26.420-07:00That sure grabbed my attention. Great excerpt.That sure grabbed my attention. Great excerpt.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7447544468792389936.post-71790141503236939932014-08-24T10:54:51.596-07:002014-08-24T10:54:51.596-07:00Good atmospherics, though I don't think I'...Good atmospherics, though I don't think I'd want to live in LA. Too many people.Sue Ann Bowlinghttp://homecomingbook.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7447544468792389936.post-90970070829890096022014-08-24T10:31:39.138-07:002014-08-24T10:31:39.138-07:00Highly atmospheric! Excellent excerpt....Highly atmospheric! Excellent excerpt....Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7447544468792389936.post-65133132327570241862014-08-24T09:52:16.349-07:002014-08-24T09:52:16.349-07:00Wow. Way to draw people into your world. That is...Wow. Way to draw people into your world. That is great!P.T.Wyanthttp://ptwyant.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7447544468792389936.post-30879805019774978882014-08-24T09:45:56.309-07:002014-08-24T09:45:56.309-07:00thanks, Joyce!thanks, Joyce!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09922888671399516573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7447544468792389936.post-78390859319372848182014-08-24T09:45:44.057-07:002014-08-24T09:45:44.057-07:00oooh, Sarah, thank you!! hehe, I tried! ;-)oooh, Sarah, thank you!! hehe, I tried! ;-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09922888671399516573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7447544468792389936.post-13635700834142708402014-08-24T09:45:10.680-07:002014-08-24T09:45:10.680-07:00thank you Millie, Sandra and Siobhan, I appreciate...thank you Millie, Sandra and Siobhan, I appreciate your comments!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09922888671399516573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7447544468792389936.post-55393696898617221322014-08-24T09:40:36.493-07:002014-08-24T09:40:36.493-07:00thanks Gem! two more weeks ... :-)thanks Gem! two more weeks ... :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09922888671399516573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7447544468792389936.post-25414913077495288312014-08-24T09:40:13.821-07:002014-08-24T09:40:13.821-07:00thanks so much Juneta, and I wish you the same wit...thanks so much Juneta, and I wish you the same with your WIP !Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09922888671399516573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7447544468792389936.post-75544592021559377292014-08-24T09:39:36.522-07:002014-08-24T09:39:36.522-07:00thanks, Linda!thanks, Linda!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09922888671399516573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7447544468792389936.post-20993754716581495212014-08-24T09:39:21.301-07:002014-08-24T09:39:21.301-07:00yup, there's such a thing as a killing season:...yup, there's such a thing as a killing season: most murders happen in the summer :-(Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09922888671399516573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7447544468792389936.post-21315307209667335492014-08-24T08:17:16.923-07:002014-08-24T08:17:16.923-07:00This is an intriguing snippet that draws the reade...This is an intriguing snippet that draws the reader in with questions.<br /><br />http://joycelansky.blogspot.com/2014/08/weekend-writing-warriors-82514.htmlCatch My Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06338761214938263819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7447544468792389936.post-37760228425082858512014-08-24T08:11:10.385-07:002014-08-24T08:11:10.385-07:00I've just finished Chimeras, and I can't w...I've just finished Chimeras, and I can't wait to read Mosiacs.<br /><br />You know you've written a first chapter made up almost entirely of irresistible hooks, right? :DSarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.com